Intento de Poema en ingles

Bueno a pesar de que mi ingles esta lejos de ser bueno, me salieron de tanto escuchar musica inglesa estas palabras en idioma anglosajon, unas buenas criticas no me vendrian nada mal asi que no duden en corregirme cualquier error


"Time is running"

Everything we all are now
Everything we were yesterday
All things we've already left behind

Every movement All we made
Every moment We had to wait
Every whisper, and Every single step

Every word We couldn't say
Every road We couldn't take
All the shadows who are coming back from yesterday
Every pride and every regret
Time must pass and We forget
Someday all we'll be lights fading away

Look at it... (..Is running)
Hear it.. (.... Is shouting)
Touch it.. (Is disappearing)
Feel it ... (Can't you?)

Every star that's in the sky
Every one that has fallen out
Most of them used to be a lost soul

And when your star doesn't want to shine
Those days you feel you cant more fight
When you think your truth is not going to be enough

Sing a song and write one line
Look for your home , fly so high
Let the love be your reason and your hurt
Is not so hard to understand
The past has gone, And you'll soon
Try to live, try to breath
Before the end gets to you too

Look at it... (..Is running)
Hear it.. (.... Is shouting)
Touch it.. (Is disappearing)
Feel it ... (Can't you?)

Dont you know? the time is laughing
And you cant see yourself in the mirror, but you're crying
Dont you feel? you're so tired
The time is laughing at you....